October Girl

will tell you I voted for Heather *sings and skips* -Max

I was born in october nice guess. Ah... a kid who likes to write?

Lavain "Well, where are we going?" I asked, as he gently took me by the wrist and led me away. "Some where safe." I snoted, "Your not in THAT much ...

cute.... I guess 7/10

makes me think of a time at another planet lol

Hmm this was a rather interesting poem, some how different, but in a good way 8) I like it... Alot although some parts just don't flow together well, try re-reading ...

Lavain. He was talking and I looked at him, stunned. My jaw almost hit the ground (lol) "Your my charge?" I asked. "Umm... What?" He stopped for a second. "I'm ...

Lavain I heard a ringing in my ear, I stared at Delia. "Do you hear that?" I asked, covering my ears. "No... What does it sound like?" She asked. I ...

Rogue (Robyn) "What are we going to do?" Flip asked walking up to me. "Oh honey I wish I knew." I said. "We just lost everything." I said looking around ...

Hmm, nice. I liked it. Really :lol: I love how the King and Queen seem so.... real. Like my parents they argue it's funny. I love your last line but ...

Lavain I came up behind Delia. My eyelids glittering with bright pink from all the fairy dust I threw on this morning, as I watched the new arrivals come one ...

Rogue (Robyn) I laughed when he told me to grow up, I was one of the most muture people here. 'Yeah I'll grow up, if you ever pry yourself away.' ...

This story is well, pretty good ^_^ I love your avvie by the way. The title really drew me in, great job two thumbs up :lol: -Max

Rogue (Robyn) Adeline and Chase were kissing.... it was gross to me because they were both like my brother and sister. "Oh, God... I'm leaving." I stood up, not caring ...

Rogue (Robyn) I put a hand to my head, someone was worried. There was a pang in someones chest, there was pain, fear, what was wrong? "What's wrong?" I whispered ...